"He ripped my heart into pieces and devoured my poor, poisoned soul."
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"With a quick peck on the cheek, instead of his usual passionate goodnight kiss, he sucked the joy from my soul. Before he left, he said, 'Take care,' and I knew it was over."
Well, but we still have "joy" and "soul" to worry about, as well as "passionate." How can you imply these abstract concepts, summon them in interesting ways?
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